6 Signs That Your Writing Isn’t Finished Yet

By Erin Nelsen

checklist.jpgForget all that business about checking a publisher’s submission guidelines before you send your manuscript in. The most important consideration when you’re preparing to take a project to the next level is whether your work itself is ready, fully conceptualized and mature. Who cares about typeface and font size if the content is half-baked? There’s no setting for “masterpiece” on my egg timer, but these guidelines will help you know when to call it done.

1. First of all, how long is it? If your manuscript is ninety-seven pages double-spaced, you’re not done yet. If it’s a thousand pages single-spaced, you likewise have some work before you. Most trade books have between 160 and 400 pages, but the right number of page depends on the genre you’re trying to enter and the purpose of your book. Do a little “market research” at the bookstore and figure out where you stand—you don’t have to match the other guys, but they are your competition. If your book is too fat or too thin, it will suffer.

2. Have you covered everything relevant? Here’s a test: When you tell people what you’re writing about and explain the concept to them, do they ask questions you don’t cover in the book? If so, you will probably want to add treatment of these common points before sending your manuscript out into the world. There’s no excuse for neglecting aspects of your topic readers want to hear about.

3. Of course, asking what readers want to hear about raises another question: who are your readers? Who is the target audience for your book? If you don’t know, you need to. Make sure that your focus isn’t too narrow or too wide. For instance, for a business book, “everyone with a job” is too broad an audience; “CEOs of Fortune 500 companies” is too narrow. Once you know who your audience is, list out what they want—and read through the manuscript to make sure you’re giving it to them.

4. Is your book really about something—something you can explain? This is the time to make sure you can describe in thirty seconds why your book is different from all the rest, practically helpful, and, of course, a must-read literary tour de force. Seriously, if you can’t say what it’s about and what it can do for the reader in thirty seconds or in the first page of the introduction, you probably need to refine your focus.

5. Have you gotten a second opinion? Don’t ask your mother. Instead, make your most tactless friend read through it, then nag her incessantly until she tells you she quit reading on page 34. Go to page 32 and figure out how to keep her reading. Repeat this process until you have no friends or someone finishes the book and likes it. If you already have no friends, a real live member of your target audience would be even better. You don’t have to take any advice you get, but you do have to listen and seriously consider it.

6. Is it neatly typed and formatted with minimal errors? I know I told you to forget the technicalities, but if you’ve made it this far, you’re ready to send it in. Congratulations!

2 Responses to “6 Signs That Your Writing Isn’t Finished Yet”

  1. Matt C. Says:

    I just caught this entry. I like it overall, but I have a big issue with Tip #1 (page-count). The first two sentences are fine, but after that, you’re forgetting your audience (if I may apply Tip #3 in a non-smart-assed way).

    If you’re working in a word processing application that is set to a default 8.5 x 11″ and it’s double-spaced, how exactly does “160 and 400 pages” in the typical trade book compare, proportionately speaking?

    First, is it not more effective to be discussing word-count rather than page-count? The former is a universal measurement whereas the latter cannot be effectively compared between what you find on the shelf of a bookstore and what you stare at on your monitor (unless of course you have a means to convert the measurements of one to the other for easy comparison).

    Lastly, and this is certainly subjective, page-count/word-count shouldn’t be the writer’s chief concern (at least that’s how I interpret “Tip #1″) - I think it’s putting the cart before the horse to instill anxiety over the volume of one’s work as opposed to the content (which is well-reflected in the ensuing tips).

    Page-count/word-count *is* (in the end) a substantial consideration before submitting, but there are too many writers out there hyper-focused on whether their Word doc is “too long” or “too short”, which inevitably gets in the way of the work itself.

    Regardless of this - I do like your blog and have it bookmarked :)

  2. Erin Says:

    Hi Matt–
    Good point, and you spotted a hole in my explanation. The formula we use to determine word count figures about 300 words/page in a trade book. So, 160 pages is 48,000 words.

    I agree that length shouldn’t be the primary concern when you’re writing, but once you’re considering sending a manuscript in, it’s an important issue.

    Thanks for catching my slip!
    –Erin

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